Some Of My First Book

I walked back to the small garden walls start to meet the bus stop, I'll have to take the subway at this hour the bus no longer goes on in this area, the night was warm with no wind like a beautiful summer night. I came home exhausted, I took a shower put on my pajamas and went to bed, the weather outside has changed drastically now and it rained a storm and fell asleep.
"My room was dark, I got up to light, but did not call, no lights lit I thought with this storm must have missed the light, I went to open the door to see if there was light in the hallway, I could not open it , scared me something strange happened, I tried to scream but with my voice did not come out, my window is opened and he burst into my room, I panicked "
I woke, I was all sweaty, I had another nightmare with it, I find myself shaking in my bed, sit bending your knees at your chest, take hands to his head and wonder why make me suffer this way appears just Peter. I jumped out of bed and falls to the ground with the scare that took the alarm, turned on the bedside table lamp and noticed that there was a note.
"Dear Jessica, come to me for 24 hours, at the entrance of the natural park on the outskirts of NewShine.
Peter "

By Jane Lee

Tell me what you think it is very important to know what you think? and if I go ahead with the book